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Thursday, April 8, 2010

Underneath this canopy of snow (National Poetry Writing Month)

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No preamble. Looked in the bathroom mirror and got an idea. Let's just do this.
I used to have perfect eyebrows.

Many people said so,
talked about the flawlessness of the curvature
immaculate pattern of growth
unruliness found it impossible to gain a foothold.

A girl I dated and her best friend
literally tackled me
then held me down on a couch once,
part marveling and part envying
grooming accomplishment they plucked and paid to obtain.

That story seems like it should end more interestingly
or at least with some inappropriate rubbing
of some sort
but that's really the end of it.

In any case, now snowdrifts lazily find their home
above my mocha-scented eyes,
peeking over wire rims
of my windows to the world.
Five white lines
grandmaster flashing through
forest of follicles
inspiring wild growth
outside established borders.

Can't say I'm aging perfectly,
who really is?
I'm not one for ambiance and vanity, though.
This is better than the alternative.

"The Onset Of Winter"
By Hannibal Tabu
Wife haiku tomorrow!

Playing (Music): "Like a Mack" by Ne-Yo

NOTE: Since this blog is automatically imported into my Facebook page, I apologize if you comment on it and I don't respond, as I am taking a sabbatical from social networking for 2010. So me not responding is not personal, I just won't see the comments ... until 2011. Maybe. Also including this disclaimer on blogs, but you're welcome to go to the blog itself and speak your mind, as I
may look there ...

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